Comments for Laura McHale Holland http://lauramchaleholland.com Author of Reversible Skirt Wed, 16 May 2012 05:30:49 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 Comment on She doesn’t know them by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1031 admin Wed, 16 May 2012 05:30:49 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1031 Thank you, dear Susan, for this comment and for the other ways you support me. I have a few ideas brewing for the next episode and will get it posted tomorrow or Tursday. Thank you, dear Susan, for this comment and for the other ways you support me. I have a few ideas brewing for the next episode and will get it posted tomorrow or Tursday.

]]> Comment on She doesn’t know them by Susan http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1030 Susan Tue, 15 May 2012 00:52:43 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1030 Hi Laura, Your writing provides intrigue and I'm totally looking for the next installment. : ) I want to sit with Eve and be able to "read" her mind. See you. Hi Laura,

Your writing provides intrigue and I’m totally looking for the next installment. : ) I want to sit with Eve and be able to “read” her mind. See you.

]]> Comment on She doesn’t know them by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1028 admin Sat, 12 May 2012 16:35:27 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1028 Thanks, Barbara, for following this story as it unfolds! Yes, as I see it, the chauffeur is a central character. I'm not sure what'll happen next, but I'll find out soon because it's already time to get to work on the next episode. Thanks, Barbara, for following this story as it unfolds! Yes, as I see it, the chauffeur is a central character. I’m not sure what’ll happen next, but I’ll find out soon because it’s already time to get to work on the next episode.

]]> Comment on She doesn’t know them by Barbara Toboni http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1027 Barbara Toboni Fri, 11 May 2012 22:31:46 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1027 I'm liking this story. Hope you can continue. It looks like the chauffeur has a special kinship with the Chloe and will be a major character? It's fun to read a section at a time. It reminds me of old fashioned serial stories on the radio. I’m liking this story. Hope you can continue. It looks like the chauffeur has a special kinship with the Chloe and will be a major character? It’s fun to read a section at a time. It reminds me of old fashioned serial stories on the radio.

]]> Comment on She doesn’t know them by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1025 admin Tue, 08 May 2012 07:24:15 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1025 Thanks for the question, Eve The person on the river bank is the chauffeur who has been visiting Chloe (the little girl) and playing with her. I may need to rework it a little bit so that is clear. Chloe's mom is Carly. Both of them were abducted, but the abductor kept Carly and dropped off Chloe, who was then a baby, at a hospital doorstep. The abductor was arrested and is in custody. Chloe and Carly are both with Carly's parents now. Thanks for the question, Eve The person on the river bank is the chauffeur who has been visiting Chloe (the little girl) and playing with her. I may need to rework it a little bit so that is clear. Chloe’s mom is Carly. Both of them were abducted, but the abductor kept Carly and dropped off Chloe, who was then a baby, at a hospital doorstep. The abductor was arrested and is in custody. Chloe and Carly are both with Carly’s parents now.

]]> Comment on She doesn’t know them by Eve Trout http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/she-doesnt-know-them/comment-page-1/#comment-1024 Eve Trout Tue, 08 May 2012 03:32:01 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1067#comment-1024 is the person sitting at the river bank the one who took Chloe? I want to know where Chloe is and why the social worker Carly her to stay away. Maybe I'm reading it wrong, but I can't wait for the next installment. is the person sitting at the river bank the one who took Chloe? I want to know where Chloe is and why the social worker Carly her to stay away. Maybe I’m reading it wrong, but I can’t wait for the next installment.

]]> Comment on A dime a dozen by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/a-dime-a-dozen/comment-page-1/#comment-1022 admin Mon, 30 Apr 2012 20:27:38 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1060#comment-1022 Thanks, Lynn. My heart is with Chloe, too, and with the former chauffeur who wants to be her foster dad. It doesn't look he'll get that honor, given what occurred in the latest episode. We'll see what the next installment brings. I'm trying to do a series of connected flashes that could each stand alone. That is quite a challenge, and I'm learning as I go. Thanks, Lynn. My heart is with Chloe, too, and with the former chauffeur who wants to be her foster dad. It doesn’t look he’ll get that honor, given what occurred in the latest episode. We’ll see what the next installment brings. I’m trying to do a series of connected flashes that could each stand alone. That is quite a challenge, and I’m learning as I go.

]]> Comment on A dime a dozen by B. Lynn Goodwin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/a-dime-a-dozen/comment-page-1/#comment-1021 B. Lynn Goodwin Mon, 30 Apr 2012 20:10:07 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1060#comment-1021 Very interesting. It feels like a chapter and I can't wait to see what's next. My heart is with Chloe, which is a comment on your realism. Take care, Lynn www.writeradvice.com Author of You Want Me to Do WHAT? Journaling for Caregivers Very interesting. It feels like a chapter and I can’t wait to see what’s next. My heart is with Chloe, which is a comment on your realism.

Take care,

Lynn
http://www.writeradvice.com
Author of You Want Me to Do WHAT? Journaling for Caregivers

]]> Comment on A dime a dozen by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/a-dime-a-dozen/comment-page-1/#comment-1020 admin Mon, 30 Apr 2012 19:13:17 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1060#comment-1020 Thanks, Eve! I try to keep in mind that most of the time we and our loved ones are A-OK. The the kidnappings and other crimes make the news (and are good story fodder) because they are compelling but rare. Thanks, Eve! I try to keep in mind that most of the time we and our loved ones are A-OK. The the kidnappings and other crimes make the news (and are good story fodder) because they are compelling but rare.

]]> Comment on A dime a dozen by admin http://lauramchaleholland.com/flash-fiction/a-dime-a-dozen/comment-page-1/#comment-1019 admin Mon, 30 Apr 2012 19:09:55 +0000 http://lauramchaleholland.com/?p=1060#comment-1019 Thank you, Ana! I very much appreciate your vision of me becoming an acclaimed super-star of the genre. May as well aim high, right? Thank you, Ana! I very much appreciate your vision of me becoming an acclaimed super-star of the genre. May as well aim high, right?

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